7 Temmuz 2008 Pazartesi

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Osman Sınav’ın yeni bir projesi olacaksa ve ben bunu duyarsam, önce heyecanlanıyorum. Ardından, dizinin hikayesi belli oluyor, heyecanım bir kat azalıyor. Çünkü zihnimde oluşan (Deli Yürek ve Kurtlar Vadisi sebebiyle) Osman Sınav profiline biraz ters düşüyor. Hikaye çok tanıdık ve bildik geliyor. Klişe yani. Diyorum ki “Sabret, önyargılı davranma”… Derken dizinin ilk tanıtım fragmanı yayınlanıyor ve benim aklım biraz daha karışıyor. Çünkü fragmandaki sloganlar çok basit ve yapay… Heyecanım bir katre daha sönüyor. Ardından, dizinin yönetmeni ve oyuncuları belirleniyor. Sonra 1.bölümünü fragmanı… İşte benim koptuğum an da bu an oluyor. Kötü bir çekim kalitesi, vasatın altında oyunculuk ya da ona rolünü vasat oynatan bir yönetmen, tekrar eden ve dünya sinemasının kabul ettiği, uyguladığı ama biz Türklerin bir türlü anlamak istemediği “Söyleme göster” kuralına tamamen aykırı diyaloglar… Belki de yönetmenin bir kabahati yok… Diyalog 4.sınıf öğrencisi seviyesindeyse yönetmen ne yapsın? Derken benim heyecanla beklediğim Osman Sınav projesi, beş para etmez diye nitelediğim bir televizyon dizisine dönüşüyor. Bunu PARS KİRAZ OPERASYONU filminde ve PUSAT dizisinde yaşadım ve tabi ki PARS NARKO TERÖR dizisinde de…

Osman Sınav, Kurtlar Vadisi’ni bıraktıktan sonra büyük bir kalite kaybına uğradı. Neden? Çünkü Raci Şaşmaz gibi, ufku açık bir adamı bırakıp, Aybars Bora Kahyaoğlu gibi Osman Sınav çizgisine ters düşen bir adamı asistan olarak seçtiği için…

Kurtlar Vadisi bambaşka bir ruha sahipti. Bakın dizinin fanatiği filan olduğumdan değil, ordaki karakterleri filan sevdiğimden değil. Tarafsız bir sinemacı olarak söylüyorum. Kurtlar Vadisi, (Osman Sınav zamanı) hem hikayesiyle, hem çekimiyle, diyaloglarıyla, oyunculuğuyla tam bir baş yapıttı. Raci Şaşmaz ve Bahadır Özdener gibi iki kaliteli senaristin müthiş hikayesi, insanı düşündüren, kelime oyunlarıyla, aforizmalarla süslü bir senaryo, çok ilginç ve kaliteli kamera açıları, hikayeye uygun ışık anlayışı Osman Sınav’ın vizyonuyla birleşince müthiş bir şey çıkmıştı ortaya… Hem de daha ilk bölümden hissettirmişti kendisini… Kurtlar Vadisi’nin yapımcısı Osman Sınav’dı, PARS’ın ki de o… Değişen ne peki? Değişen tek şey var: Kaliteli Senarist-Kalitesiz Senarist

Kalite farkını anlamak için başlangıç sloganlarına bakalım…

KURTLAR VADİSİ

“Burası Kurtlar Vadisi, burada insan sevdiği için ölür, yaşamak için öldürür…”
“Ölmek en büyük maceramız…”
“Burası Kurtlar Vadisi… Türkiye’de sokaklardan başlayıp, belli bir hiyerarşik bütünlük içinde yükselerek çok derin ve etkili bir konseye dönüşen mafya örgütlenmesiyle, ona karşı mücadeleye soyunanların hikayesi… Bu hem bireysel hem toplumsal yansımaları olan bir serüvendir. Bu serüvende ölmek en büyük maceradır. Burda insan sevdiği için ölür, yaşamak için öldürür.”

Bir de PARS NARKO TERÖR’e bakalım… Neticede hikayesi hemen hemen aynı, bir örgüt ve bu örgütle mücadele edecek bir kahraman var…

PARS NARKO TERÖR

“Bir kilo eroin satarlar, 180000 kalaşnikof mermisi alırlar. Peki kaç Mehmetçik şehit ederler? Onları kim durduracak? Pars….
“Bir kilo eroin satarlar …………. mayın alırlar, topraklarımıza kurarlar. Peki kaç topuk kaç bacak kopar? Kaç can toprağa düşer? Onları kim durduracak? Pars….

Tamam, bunlar bu ülkenin gerçekleri… onların belirtilmesi güzel. Ancak Kurtlar Vadisi’nin bahsettiği şey de gerçeklerdi. Onlar hiç böyle klişe şeylere sığınmadılar… Ben hatırlıyorum. 2002’nin Ağustos ayında, (hatta o gün doğum günümdü) televizyonda Kurtlar Vadisi’nin tanıtım fragmanına rastlamıştım. Aslan Bey’in tok sesi, konseyin kontrol ettiği paradan bahsediyordu ve çok etkilenmiştim… Ama PARS’ın fragmanını görünce açıkçası gülesim geldi yani. Belki işlediği konu gülünecek bir konu değil ama bu acı konunun bu kadar komik bir biçimde tanıtılması garibime gitti.

Şimdi siz diyeceksiniz, slogandan dizi mi yargılanır diye? Ben de diyorum ki neticede sloganı yazanla senaryoyu yazanlar aynı olacak… Slogan yapmacıksa, dizi de yapmacıktır…

Gelelim diyalog kısmına…


1.bölüm fragmanını izledim ve yine gülesim geldi. Dizinin baş karakteri Şamil ile bir askerin konuşması var fragmanda… Duydukça televizyon ekranını kırasım geliyor. Bu kadar iddialı konuyu işleyecek diziye bu kadar klişe diyaloglar neden konulur? Bu benim bile dikkatimi çekiyorsa, Osman Sınav gibi bir yapımcının neden dikkatini çekmez, bir yönetmen böyle bir şeye nasıl izin verir diye… Diyalog aynen şöyle…

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ASKER: Bunlar var ya bunlar bir kilo eroin satarlar, yaklaşık bir buçuk ton c4 patlayıcı alırlar… Hesapta terörle mücadele başka narkotik başka değil mi? (Eliyle işaret eder) Şu yüzünü döndüğün tarafa doğru dümdüz gitsen Alamut’a varırsın. Hasan Sabbah’ın eski evi…

ŞAMİL: Yanındaki fedailere haşhaş içirip suikasta gönderen Sabbah….

ASKER: Ha Sabbah’ın Alamut’u ha Kandil… Avuç avuç kaptagon çıkıyor teröristlerin üstünden. Haplayıp haplayıp salıyor Mehmetçiğin üzerine… Silahların parası da beyazdan…

ŞAMİL: Buralarda hikaye bin yıldır hep ayni galiba abi…

Şimdi bu diyaloğu bir analiz edelim bakalım. Bu diyalog doğal olacağım diye işin büyüsünü kaçırmış. Asker yapmacık olmayayım diye kendini öyle bir kasmış ki yapmacığın alası olmuş.
Tamam araştırma sonucu elde edilen bilgilere bir diyeceğim yok ama bu diyalog Osman Sınav dizisine yakışmayan bir diyalog. Bir kere, “bunlar var ya bunlar” sözü bir kahve muhabbetidir. Kahvelerde oturup okumadan siyaset tartışmaya çalışan adamların lafıdır. Doğallığı ifade edebilir ama bu dizide sırıtan bir diyalogtur. Burada Hasan Sabbah’ı Şamil’in bilmemesi ve Asker’in ona Hasan Sabbah’ı anlatması daha etkileyici olurdu. Şamil’in garip bir edayla Hasan Sabbah’ı anlatması yakışmamış oraya… Bir de konuşmanın geçtiği mekan güzel bir mekan. Böyle güzel mekanlara duygusal ve etkileyici konuşmalar yazılmalı. Ben olsam bu diyaloğu Hasan Sabbah’ın hikayesiyle başlatır, sonra teröre geçer ve en sona ikisini de içeren bir aforizma bulurdum. Ne yazık ki “Buralarda hikaye bin yıldır hep aynı galiba abi” lafı orayı kesmemiş pek. Daha etkileyici, orijinal, duygusal bir cümleye bağlanabilirdi bu konu. Neyse fazla abartmayayım.. Ama bu gibi küçük unsurlar, bir senaristin kalitesini ortaya koyan unsurlardır. Bu gibi ince noktaların gözden kaçmasıyla geliyor zaten başımıza ne geliyorsa. Diyalog her şeydir. Kötü diyalogları olan bir sinema ürününün izlenebilirliği düşer. İsterseniz, 100 milyon dolar harcayın, isterseniz hikayeniz dünyanın en iyi hikayesi olsun.

Sonuç olarak anlatmak istediğim şu… Osman Sınav bu Aybars Bora denen adamla çalışmaya devam ettikçe kalitesi düşmeye devam edecektir. Osman Sınav’ı Osman Sınav yapan Raci Şaşmaz’dır. Eğer Kurtlar Vadisi’ndeki kaliteyi yakalamak istiyorsa Raci Şaşmaz gibi adamlara ihtiyacı vardır.

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